Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Feedback from our survey

So we got several responses back from our draft and survey. Overall they were very positive, especially liking the narrative, the camera work and the soundtrack. However it has become clear to improve our OTS we can sound level as narration is hard to hear and we can improve the ending as it seems very rushed.

To improve, I as editor am going to adjust the sound levels of the whole OTS. Wil has re-recored the scene's dialogue at the end so that can be dubbed over. Below is evidence of the responses.










1 comment:

  1. you need to deconstruct the results in more detail - percentages responding in similar/different ways - what was predictable and what was a surprise / link ir to N.A.R.I.M. etc - you can talk it but you also need to present it here to please the moderator

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